When selecting your hair and skin color there are a lot of little errors. The cycling choices work fine, but the sentences they are in don't make sense (they omit the words "skin" and "hair" so its kind of just a guess about what I am selecting). Also a lot of the darker skin tones have a rogue quotation mark in front of them (eg "olive).
There is also a pretty serious syntax error on one of the choices. I believe it is the second flirt choice you get, the flirt option is functional but the formatting box around it is broken and the HTML code is showing through.
Aw! That was pretty short, and I'm quite interested in the backstory behind MC and THAT VOICE in my head; I maybe just love a littletoo much when there's a voice/spirit/or whatever inside the MC's head! Idk why, but I just LOVE that!!
Soo~, good knowing this isn't abandoned, since it was updated two months ago!! I'm looking forward the next chaptersss!!~
Oh I gotta say if i was in the situation well shit I got people who want to kill me. For no reason and I don't know why. Because I'm covered in blood. And the only 2 allies I might have is a vampire anda war lock. And the voice in my head that is the narrator.
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Hey there! Just a tiny question, will you add they/them pronouns for the MC in the future?
Enjoyed the update and look forward to more!
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When selecting your hair and skin color there are a lot of little errors. The cycling choices work fine, but the sentences they are in don't make sense (they omit the words "skin" and "hair" so its kind of just a guess about what I am selecting). Also a lot of the darker skin tones have a rogue quotation mark in front of them (eg "olive).
There is also a pretty serious syntax error on one of the choices. I believe it is the second flirt choice you get, the flirt option is functional but the formatting box around it is broken and the HTML code is showing through.
i tried to catch any coding errors before i sent it out im so sorry i didnt catch these but thank you so much for letting me know!!
No problem! I know how hard it can be to track every little detail down, there's always something that slips notice lol.
Aw! That was pretty short, and I'm quite interested in the backstory behind MC and THAT VOICE in my head; I maybe just love a little
too muchwhen there's a voice/spirit/or whatever inside the MC's head! Idk why, but I just LOVE that!!Soo~, good knowing this isn't abandoned, since it was updated two months ago!! I'm looking forward the next chaptersss!!~
Hii, just wanted to ask if mc's gender is set or not??
hiii sorry for such a late reply. Mcs gender is selectable! the only things set about them will be their eye color and their back story<3
That's totes fine! Thank you for answering<33
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Oh I gotta say if i was in the situation well shit I got people who want to kill me. For no reason and I don't know why. Because I'm covered in blood. And the only 2 allies I might have is a vampire anda war lock. And the voice in my head that is the narrator.
Definitely interested but will have to read after work, scrolling doesn't work on mobile
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Had to come check it out after you posted the link and it's a very good start! Very mysterious 👀